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What do you think of this song i just wrote?

Kbrat - 2008-04-13 20:39:07 - Other - Music

Tick tock As time passes by My hands are shacking My heart is racing My mind starts to wander away My mouth isn’t sure what to say And just as I almost have it I loose it again Just as I feel things will change I stumble back to the same old pattern Into a place where all dreams Are broken in half Into a nightmare there is No waking up from A world where there’s No such thing as being sheltered A life where you’re the only one You can truly trust and count on When will I feel that I’ am Welcomed here That there is someone Out there that cares That the world for once Is on my side And not plotting against me When will I get My turn My turn to be something For someone to care And want me there My turn to show Who I’ am on the inside And let everyone see That I matter When will I get My turn Time passes by And I’ve only moved Farther back Back to the same old nothing A life of sleepless nights And a endless fight I have going on In my mind And I feel I might Crumble apart When will I get My turn to be something For someone to care And want me there My turn to show Who I’ am on the inside And let everyone see That I matter When will I get My turn When will I feel that I’ am Welcomed here That there is someone Out there that cares That the world for once Is on my side And not plotting against me When will I get My turn My turn to be something For someone to care And want me there My turn to show Who I’ am on the inside And let everyone see That I matter When will I get My turn

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very good

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sounds pretty awesome

this song is amazing!. i think if you were to get some instrumentals for it and take it to a producer and get it copyrighted you would probably make it bigg!. lol. seriously... people can relate to what youre sayin gin this songg. its great. i love it. you did a good job.

depends on what the music sounds like, maybe good accompanied by a piano.or an acoustic guitar

I believe that it is too long for a song... and it's kinda emo, but if that's what you were going for then good job. not exactly my style but I'm sure others will enjoy it

very good